Death of An Angel

DEATH  OF  AN  ANGEL


My fragile child had made a snow angel
One morning in the schoolyard white;
Then, flying home after the school bell,
Her little life was dashed by a car, outright.

The snow angel melted that day,
Disappeared under the yard grass tall.
Now, a lifetime later, I’d say
You’d hardly know it existed at all.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Johnson Avatar
April 10, 2017 at 12:09 PM
Well written. Goes straight to the heart. Hope it's not true. GBY.
Beck Avatar
April 10, 2017 at 12:27 PM
no....thank heaven it's not true..............it was just an idea I got from watching small kids at school do the angel in snow stunt.........thanks for liking my stuff, ...........best wishes
Bauer Avatar
March 6, 2017 at 4:23 PM
i hope this isn't true, sidney. it's very sad and touching, though...
Beck Avatar
March 7, 2017 at 2:33 PM
no....thank heaven it's not true..............it was just an idea I got from watching small kids at school do the angel in snow stunt.........thanks for liking my stuff, Ilene, and for all your support - I value it greatly...........best wishes
Onclaud Avatar
March 6, 2017 at 1:37 PM
heartbreaking and yet beautifully done.. not a crap; i hope you like this piece i sent you, sid... j kidding!
Beck Avatar
March 6, 2017 at 2:32 PM
great to hear from you Netski..........glad you liked that one you sent me.............have been away from the Soup cos been writing short stories ( some are on the Soup, q.v.).....I miss your quick wit and excellent poetry.....better stop now before the cascading drops wash my cheeks clean.......hahaha
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