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I recall the day that I brought h e r home, six weeks old and a ball of spotted fur; all around the house that day she did roam, at times- she ran so fast she was a blur. Then, she would c r a w l upon my knee to purr, oh, such a murmuring tranquility; that little s o u l was all fragility, I came home- to find my little girl dead. will miss her sweet s o f t personality, I buried her- under my roses red. ___________________________ August 29, 2016 Poetry/Dizain/"Death Of A Kitten" Copyright Protected, ID 16-824-315-0 All Rights Reserved. Written under Pseudonym. For the contest, Dizain Poem II sponsor, Laura Loo Third Place In Memory of "Peanut" the kitten (July 15- August 29, 2016)

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Date: 9/13/2016 1:15:00 PM
Very nice dizain, Broken wings. It touched my heart.
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Date: 9/13/2016 10:18:00 AM
Your Dizain poem was awesome, creative and unique..Congratulations on your placement..Sara
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Date: 9/11/2016 12:09:00 PM
Constance, this is so heartwarming truly beautiful one of your very best.....congratulations on your win! Hugs Eve
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Date: 9/11/2016 10:36:00 AM
Dropping back with my congrats Constance:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 9/11/2016 9:29:00 AM
"Oh Broken Wings...tearing at my heart strings..you make your pen sing...and resound with a tender ring..." :) This is yet another example of your gift :) beautifully written, sad and perfect flow, everything I was expecting and looking for :) congratulations on your placement and thank you for being a part of my contest :)-luloo
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Date: 9/11/2016 10:47:00 AM
by the way the picture makes the poem even better :)-luloo
Date: 9/3/2016 10:18:00 AM
A sad poem BW, sweetly written.
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Date: 8/29/2016 7:20:00 PM
I love it, Constance. thanks for letting me know. I am late for spin class. Oh boy, I better get going. one last thing. I notice an uneven number of lines. I count ten lines but didn't the rules say to do four stanzas? Maybe I am mixing up with another form. I need to see how many lines per stanza. Maybe it can be two stanzas. That would make sense here! That must be it!
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Date: 8/29/2016 6:40:00 PM
aww Constance the poem is a lovely tribute and the picture of the cat with angel wings is very apt:-) good lick in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 8/29/2016 5:51:00 PM
what an adorable picture. CAn't wait to see what you come up with
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