Constance La France Poet Dizain

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''Death of a Kitten''

I recall the day that I brought  h e r  home,
          six weeks old and a ball of spotted fur;
all around the house that day she did roam,
     at times-  she ran so fast she was a blur.
Then, she would  c r a w l  upon my knee to purr,
               oh, such a murmuring tranquility;
that little  s o u l  was all fragility,
     I came home-  to find my little girl dead.
will miss her sweet  s o f t  personality,
               I buried her-  under my roses red.
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August 29, 2016

Poetry/Dizain/"Death Of A Kitten"
Copyright Protected, ID 16-824-315-0
All Rights Reserved.  Written under Pseudonym.

For the contest, Dizain Poem II
sponsor, Laura Loo


Third Place

In Memory of "Peanut" the kitten (July 15- August 29, 2016)

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Sarban Bhattacharya September 13, 2016 at 1:15 PM Very nice dizain, Broken wings. It touched my heart.

Sara Kendrick September 13, 2016 at 10:18 AM Your Dizain poem was awesome, creative and unique..Congratulations on your placement..Sara

Eve Roper September 11, 2016 at 12:09 PM Constance, this is so heartwarming truly beautiful one of your very best.....congratulations on your win! Hugs Eve

Jan Allison September 11, 2016 at 10:36 AM Dropping back with my congrats Constance:-) hugs jan xx

Beautiful Scars September 11, 2016 at 9:29 AM "Oh Broken Wings...tearing at my heart strings..you make your pen sing...and resound with a tender ring..." :) This is yet another example of your gift :) beautifully written, sad and perfect flow, everything I was expecting and looking for :) congratulations on your placement and thank you for being a part of my contest :)-luloo Beautiful Scars September 11, 2016 at 10:47 AM by the way the picture makes the poem even better :)-luloo

James Inman September 3, 2016 at 10:18 AM A sad poem BW, sweetly written.

Andrea Dietrich August 29, 2016 at 7:20 PM I love it, Constance. thanks for letting me know. I am late for spin class. Oh boy, I better get going. one last thing. I notice an uneven number of lines. I count ten lines but didn't the rules say to do four stanzas? Maybe I am mixing up with another form. I need to see how many lines per stanza. Maybe it can be two stanzas. That would make sense here! That must be it!

Jan Allison August 29, 2016 at 6:40 PM aww Constance the poem is a lovely tribute and the picture of the cat with angel wings is very apt:-) good lick in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx

Andrea Dietrich August 29, 2016 at 5:51 PM what an adorable picture. CAn't wait to see what you come up with