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Death of a Discordant Love

A soul in flames daunting the discordant canvas, eradicating the supreme veil. To be drenched in apathy coincides inversely with the stench of a bitter legacy. Severed souls search asunder for a subversive scent, only to be oppressed in an overt art. Begging death for a drenching darkness to obliterate this dire desolation. Complete in nocturne this grotesque being of infinite hate commands coercively.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 3/29/2011 1:41:00 PM
amazing.. nothing has made me think the way this piece did for a while
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Date: 3/29/2011 10:01:00 AM
I enjoyed reading your creative poetry today Lucas. Have a wonderful day and may you find even more inspiration to write as the day goes by. Love, Carol
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Date: 3/29/2011 2:57:00 AM
Discordant love so eloquently portrayed in this well written piece.
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