Death of a Discordant Love

A soul in flames daunting the discordant canvas, eradicating the supreme veil. To be 
drenched in apathy coincides inversely with the stench of a bitter legacy. Severed 
souls search asunder for a subversive scent, only to be oppressed in an overt art. 
Begging death for a drenching darkness to obliterate this dire desolation. Complete 
in nocturne this grotesque being of infinite hate commands coercively.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Doreus Avatar
March 29, 2011 at 1:41 PM
amazing.. nothing has made me think the way this piece did for a while
Brown Avatar
March 29, 2011 at 10:01 AM
I enjoyed reading your creative poetry today Lucas. Have a wonderful day and may you find even more inspiration to write as the day goes by. Love, Carol
Nutter Avatar
March 29, 2011 at 2:57 AM
Discordant love so eloquently portrayed in this well written piece.
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