Death O Deathless

Like a gift unoffered, you've snatched my sweetheart!
Lifeless, aimless, like her ghost I drag on here!

Body cold! Bleached as washer-man thump!
Hair still growing! Nails getting sharpened!
White burial shroud; No wedding gown!
Flower dumped; Ruby necklace covered up!
Unknown smile! Farewell? Joyous to part?
Or already gained a glimpse of paradise?
Your hands seem to resist the mud fall!
As though not ready to be buried!

Yes, dear Death! You’ve determined to take her away!
Here she is; at your command; submissive; Silent!
You had tried this many times! Saved by money and science?
What all names you gave! Cancer! Hemorrhage! Cardiac arrest!
I think at the time of your impulse of calling someone,
You do not listen to God, leave alone the heavenly angels!
I have been praying for your death, but you have none!
Today she might be; tomorrow me; then sons and daughters...!
Or all before me, leaving me double-dead and none to care!
Bon, voyage to you, dear Death, till we meet again soon!





26 October, 2021
Let's Mix It Up Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: Constance La France
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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La France Avatar
November 4, 2021 at 2:37 PM
Christuraj, impressive write and congratulations on your win in my Let's Mix It Up Contest ~ peace and tranquility _Constance
Goldsmith Avatar
November 2, 2021 at 8:44 AM
Congratulations on your story/win. Your "Death O Deathless" is a deep/creative write. One day, something we all will need to face. Have a blessed autumn day................
Agustin Avatar
November 1, 2021 at 8:36 PM
Congrats! Thanks for sharing this muse filled with wisdom on facing the reality of death. God bless you.
Jayasankar Avatar
November 1, 2021 at 11:07 AM
Oh this is so deep and emotional Chris...So well penned and creative...Congrats on your win...God bless...~ Ani
Ashley Avatar
October 31, 2021 at 4:41 PM
Dear Chisturaj, your expressive pen spills impressive emotion and imagery. A dramatic and gripping piece. Congratulations for your excellent win in Constance’s contest. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
Pandit Avatar
October 31, 2021 at 6:39 AM
Well done Christuraj. Congrats on your podium win.
Alex Avatar
October 31, 2021 at 6:48 AM
Thank you very much.
Edmonds  Avatar
October 31, 2021 at 3:36 AM
Congratulations on your win with this narrative on “Death O Deathless” Christuraj. Sadly death can come when it’s least expected, and at anytime at all… Well written, Belle
Alex Avatar
October 31, 2021 at 4:52 AM
Thank you very much.
Ade Avatar
October 26, 2021 at 6:54 PM
Death is a universal truth. No one is able to avoid it when naturally comes. Well done, Christuraj Alex. Good luck for the contest. Nice poem.
Alex Avatar
October 26, 2021 at 11:25 PM
Thank you very much.
Cunningham Avatar
October 26, 2021 at 10:30 AM
Well written Christuraj, it comes in many disguises and it's a frightening thought that one day it will come for us. Good luck in the contest. Hope your week is going well Tom
Alex Avatar
October 26, 2021 at 11:09 AM
Thank you very much.
Rose  Avatar
October 26, 2021 at 9:21 AM
Death can be a scary thing, and a solitary passage too, you did right to bid it adieu dear Chris
Alex Avatar
October 26, 2021 at 11:09 AM
Thank you very much.
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