Death Into the Black Fire

In my last moments
I swim into the past
remembering the laughs
all the time spent together
along with every face
of my family and friends
as I die
the black fire erases everything
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Roper Avatar
September 26, 2018 at 1:01 PM
deep write you've created, I hope you never experience death ... I know we all have to die one day.
Thomas Avatar
April 10, 2018 at 4:37 PM
Vermillion so beautifully sad. ...yet peaceful
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