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Death Hurts

Death
Eerie
Abiding
Thief of all souls
Halt

Hear
Unfurl
Rhapsodies
Tenebrific
See

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March 17, 2019


Poetry/Lanterne/Death Hurts
Copyright Protected, ID 19-1125-550-02
All Rights Reserved.  Written under Pseudonym.

Written for the contest,Light Up the Page 3, Any theme
sponsor, Joseph May

Third Place

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Related Words for tenebrific- black, bleak, blue, cheerless, crestfallen, dark, dejected, depressed, desolate, despondent, disconsolate, dismal, dispirited, dour, downcast, downhearted, dreary, forlorn, glum
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Gauthier Avatar
April 1, 2019 at 10:49 PM
Well penned, Constance. Congrats on your win.
Romios Avatar
March 28, 2019 at 6:54 PM
Yahoo! Dear Heart, so happy for you. You deserve this, the wonderful soul you are!! Outstanding poem for a truly outstanding woman. Panagiota Romios
Andresen Avatar
March 27, 2019 at 2:05 PM
- Congratulations on a great win, D.H. :) -
Roper Avatar
March 26, 2019 at 8:47 PM
Dear Heart, great write, congratulations on your awesome win. Hugs Eve ~`*
Allison Avatar
March 26, 2019 at 8:25 PM
dark and sad is what you do best Constance, many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
Dietrich Avatar
March 26, 2019 at 5:39 PM
Back with my congratulations, Dearest heart!
May Avatar
March 26, 2019 at 5:21 PM
The chilling photo says it all DH...Congrats on your win
Dietrich Avatar
March 19, 2019 at 5:09 PM
Wow, you did an amazng job, Dear Heart. When i post mine, it is not going to have the 'related" words.I think he is letting us go on that. For doing it pefectly, I think you deserve a top spot!
Kiser Avatar
March 18, 2019 at 10:57 AM
Chilling and deep. Good luck in the contest.
Daniel Avatar
March 18, 2019 at 7:26 AM
Dark and touching, great pic too, Dear Heart:)
Andresen Avatar
March 18, 2019 at 5:20 AM
- Excellent, dark and powerful, D.H. - Good luck in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Krutsinger Avatar
March 17, 2019 at 8:04 PM
You have introduced me to the same word you introduced Jan to. Tenebrific. Never heard of it before. Good luck in the contest. Your poem is profound.
Allison Avatar
March 17, 2019 at 6:34 PM
dark and deep Constance and I learned a new word tenebrific is terrific!!:-) hugs Jan xx
Ibeh Avatar
March 17, 2019 at 5:18 PM
Marvelous work, Constance!:-) Good luck in the contest! Yours is a winner to me, too.
Lee Sr. Avatar
March 17, 2019 at 4:41 PM
Even in it's unfinished state it's great.. Can't hardly wait for the fini James
La France Avatar
March 17, 2019 at 4:57 PM
Hi James, all done, its a hard form to make the poem make sense, hope I did and hope you will come back, oh I know its sort of dark, buts that's my thing and he did say any theme ~
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