Death Came In Swiftly

death came in swiftly snatched up my cousin Bobby left us heartbroken

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/27/2018 3:02:00 PM

so sad. It can happen ever so swiftly!!

Caren Krutsinger
Date: 9/27/2018 7:29:00 PM

Always a shock. No exceptions.

Winged Warrior

Date: 9/27/2018 12:11:00 PM

Untimely death!...wish we had time machines...my condolences Caren...love & eternal peace...^WW^

Caren Krutsinger
Date: 9/27/2018 1:53:00 PM

It is weird to me, but death always shocks and surprises, even when it was lingering.

Rhona Mcferran

Date: 9/27/2018 11:09:00 AM

I feel the pain of this deeply (as I have lost many loved ones this way). Very apt description, my friend. I'm so sorry for your loss.

Caren Krutsinger
Date: 9/27/2018 11:13:00 AM

It was actually this week, and it was a good friend's loss. The funeral is today.

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 9/27/2018 10:37:00 AM

Hi Caren, Very sad but all too true . Best wishes my friend. xoxo Jennifer

Caren Krutsinger
Date: 9/27/2018 10:53:00 AM

Thank you.

M. L. Kiser

Date: 9/27/2018 5:57:00 AM

Yes, it does, all too swiftly sometimes. Well done.

Caren Krutsinger
Date: 9/27/2018 6:38:00 AM

It is difficult to explain the suddenness of it.