Death Came In

Death came in
like a creeping fog;
it’s presence sinister
yet formidable,
pervading the air
as it encroached upon
her frail body,
which for just a few more
brief moments
would continue to harbor
her soul
before being pulled 
into death’s carriage
and taken away into the void
for eternal rest.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2025



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Date: 5/21/2025 4:39:00 AM
Very beautiful poetry!
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Katie Telling
Date: 5/24/2025 1:58:00 PM
Thanks so much!! :)
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