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Death called at my front door last night but no one was home. I might’ve invited him in but before ask for whom the doorbell tolls lest it was me he was looking for Was time up on my alarm clock or a false alarm? Jeepers creepers last night I forgot to fasten the lock but duh, he has a skeleton key and I now call on the jabberwock We met once and it was grim yet he took someone else that day. But I was sure my chances were slim for there hung a dead silence as he looked at me and I at him Death called by again today but I was in the karzi without a care. Didn’t stay long the old prick but hey when you gotta go you gotta go and I know he’ll be back one day Should he return tomorrow I’ll ask “so what took you so long? I’ve been expecting you, you know”. For years I've seen the spectre and have walked in your shadow I won’t bargain with a-holes or fear the dead or man in black. He is Death and come for my soul and I become my seal of fate for he is the destroyer of worlds O’ who do you think you are that life and time is yours to take. On my shelf I keep my soul in a jar so take it all for I am still here and lucky to have come this far I’m sure our paths will cross if he wants to meet up bad enough. I won’t beg for more time or my loss so Reaper raise up your scythe cos I could not give a flying toss Written: November 2021 *In memory of a good friend. Inspired by a poem from NZ poet, Sam Hunt, called Death Called By. Note: Jabberwock or jabberwocky is a reference only my mate would understand. RIP C.B.

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Date: 5/25/2025 10:24:00 AM
A very moving poem that is by turns droll, poignant, sad and defiant. I love the range of moods and how you represent them with words. Thank you for sharing this.
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Keith D Trestrail
Date: 5/25/2025 3:05:00 PM
Thanks Roxanne. It was a fun write. Unlike Death, you are not an unwanted visitor. Cheers.
Date: 4/26/2025 3:35:00 PM
An outstanding read. I loved the macabre tones. I appreciated the honest reference to Sam Hunt. May you continue to escape the Grim Reaper.
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Keith D Trestrail
Date: 4/26/2025 6:47:00 PM
He knows where I live. I’ve tried changing address but he must have some sort of afterlife GPS tracker. Cheers Hilda.
Date: 4/24/2025 5:48:00 PM
Keith awesome write. Love the Satire and rebellion on your part. Such a heartfelt piece with special meaning for your cherished friend. It is special the bond you and your friend had for you to keep a part of him in your write on a personal level. So sorry for your loss... This one is another favorite two in a role today my friend...
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Keith D Trestrail
Date: 4/24/2025 8:38:00 PM
Thanks MT. When he comes I’ll be ready.
Date: 4/18/2025 9:36:00 AM
Dear Keith, I enjoyed the defiant tone of your poem in the close calls yet missed interactions with Death. I also appreciated your poet's note and the mention of your good friend and reference to "jabberwocky". Your rebellious imagery.. and clever, sharp-edged smart-a** imagery like "skeleton key" and the whole "karsi" stanza.. is as dark and ruthless as Death itself. Congratulations for your success in Sara's contest. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
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Keith D Trestrail
Date: 4/18/2025 6:12:00 PM
Thanks muchly, Susan. Death hasn’t knocked in a while but does drive past occasionally. Appreciate your comments and warmest wishes to you too.
Date: 4/16/2025 11:23:00 PM
Congrats! Thanks for sharing your talent. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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Date: 5/17/2025 12:05:00 PM
Wait! Is that a new verse? Checking...
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Keith D Trestrail
Date: 4/17/2025 6:21:00 AM
And God bless you too, Beata.
Date: 4/16/2025 6:24:00 AM
Congratulations on placing in my contest. I enjoyed how is your write death keeps just missing you. Yet death keeps coming because you can't escape fate. "O’ who do you think you are that life and time is yours to take. On my shelf I keep my soul in a jar so take it all for I am still here and lucky to have come this far," is definitely my favourite stanza. Especially I keep my soul in a jar. Jabberwock if I'm not overstepping was from Alice's adventurous in wonderland if i remember correctly.
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Keith D Trestrail
Date: 4/16/2025 8:33:00 PM
Yeah, that’s right. Jabberwocky is also a Monty Python film based on Lewis Carroll’s poem. It was a code word we used whenever we found ourselves in a situation where we were bored or uncomfortable or just wanted to leave. Thanks for stopping by.
Date: 4/16/2025 3:58:00 AM
Keith, this poem of yours is stunning, and an instant fave. Congratulations on a well-deserved win!
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Keith D Trestrail
Date: 4/16/2025 4:31:00 AM
Thanks Ed, we can hide from the reaper, we can run from the reaper, but we can’t cheat the reaper. Cheers.
Date: 4/15/2025 9:21:00 AM
Brilliant, just my kid of poem, congratulations
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Keith D Trestrail
Date: 4/16/2025 1:23:00 AM
Thank you, Terry. Don’t fear the reaper. When he knocks again I’ll say “I gotta have more cowbell!”
Date: 4/15/2025 9:13:00 AM
Congratulations on your placement, Keith. I enjoyed your humor, it shone like a light through the darkness!
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Keith D Trestrail
Date: 4/16/2025 1:28:00 AM
Appreciate it, Anaya. When Death does call by again I’ll just call on the jabberwock. Don’t ask.
Date: 4/14/2025 11:50:00 AM
The ending with the reference of your friend and your special word quoted really made me feel sad and feel the pain of loss and grief as iv lost a bestfriend too, so that hits deep. As for your reapers requiem that is written in such a fearless manner depicts the voice of a soul that is ready for what may come especially with lines such as "On my shelf I keep my soul in a jar so take it all for I am still here" soul hitting and some wordplay here leaves a hint of humor too, made me wonder, what would it be like when death knocks on the door! A powerful and soulfully moving poem. Congratulations on your placement in saras contest. Pleasure reading
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Keith D Trestrail
Date: 4/14/2025 7:31:00 PM
Hello there, Inky. So nice to see a real comment and not a cut and paste platitude for once. Nice to meet you. God bless.
Date: 4/14/2025 4:42:00 AM
Well I'll advise on my meeting, in which I contracted shock..And never managed a Greeting' how or what is seen will deoend On how we've been? Or what is projected To me thats how it seems.? I could be wrong Only a limited man, yet if you go vist my next To last poem, you might get a jist.? Or should That be a ghost of how things might pan.? All Blessings Keith.)
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Keith D Trestrail
Date: 4/14/2025 7:33:00 PM
Thanks Joe.
Date: 4/9/2025 6:33:00 PM
What if the Reaper really looks like Brad Pitt or Tom Brady?
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Keith D Trestrail
Date: 4/9/2025 7:34:00 PM
That wouldn’t scare me but my Reaper looks like Jack Palance.
Date: 4/9/2025 11:21:00 AM
After reading this I've removed my welcome mat from my front door.
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Keith D Trestrail
Date: 4/10/2025 12:39:00 AM
Good luck with that. Cheers.
Date: 4/8/2025 6:34:00 AM
Handsome fellow, though he needs more carbs.
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Keith D Trestrail
Date: 4/8/2025 7:44:00 PM
Indeed. Has some sort of skin condition too. When he comes back to visit I’ll be sure to mention it.

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