Death By Daoism

Eeyore the Dr. Ignorant,
Winnie the Pooh, ambulant,
On a walk in the woods,
Are they up to no good?
Winnie does say,
In his happiest way,
"Buzz, buzz, buzz,
I wonder where the birdies was?
Whoops, in my eye, birdie's blip!
I guess that's what you call a gift!"
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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August 20, 2024 at 2:15 PM
Straight forward, word play not necessary, and a nice tone.
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August 20, 2024 at 1:51 PM
punctuation would help the flow from a readers prospective. I like the work that went into it though.
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August 20, 2024 at 1:36 PM
Basic but I always respect a poets fundamentals demonstrated. good job.
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August 20, 2024 at 1:24 PM
I love melatonin, I rarely dream.. or remember anything rarely. Interesting perspective.
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August 20, 2024 at 1:21 PM
This hits in a very innovative and special way. Keep it up!
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