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Death By Daoism

Eeyore the Dr. Ignorant, Winnie the Pooh, ambulant, On a walk in the woods, Are they up to no good? Winnie does say, In his happiest way, "Buzz, buzz, buzz, I wonder where the birdies was? Whoops, in my eye, birdie's blip! I guess that's what you call a gift!"

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Date: 8/20/2024 2:15:00 PM
Straight forward, word play not necessary, and a nice tone.
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Date: 8/20/2024 1:51:00 PM
punctuation would help the flow from a readers prospective. I like the work that went into it though.
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Date: 8/20/2024 1:36:00 PM
Basic but I always respect a poets fundamentals demonstrated. good job.
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Date: 8/20/2024 1:24:00 PM
I love melatonin, I rarely dream.. or remember anything rarely. Interesting perspective.
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Date: 8/20/2024 1:21:00 PM
This hits in a very innovative and special way. Keep it up!
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