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Death Below

You hope to die one day That'd serve as a fun day You want to cut your wrists Or talk about the risks That the loaded gun brought you But you are still here alive Yes you work a nine to five To get by, at night you cried When this world only promised lies But everyday I'm battling with you Sadness seems to cloud our minds Sometimes I dig through gold mines To reach my soul for another day So I hope you reflect on this Sometimes our actions effect this You can never bet a wish When death is on the list

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 1/30/2017 11:29:00 PM
A very heartfelt poem you have written here, Morgen! I'm just happy to see you write! I think you are a great poet my friend!
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Morgen Farmer
Date: 2/2/2017 6:42:00 PM
Thank you Wolf! You are great poet as well. Your tales really are interesting haha
Date: 1/29/2017 6:16:00 AM
About death, the gloomiest subject, but you are so alive. Your poem is so musical.
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Morgen Farmer
Date: 2/2/2017 6:43:00 PM
Thank You. I always have this musical tune when I write.

Book: Shattered Sighs