Death and Decay

lying on the dirt floor twisting and turning in my sleep, i hear a moan and one last sigh, and then a lady starts to weep. i try to wake up from this terrible dream, and the dangers that face me. but as i blink i notice one thing, my dream is reality. i look up at my mother, a strong and kind woman, and ask her what has happened because to me, it looks like a bad omen. although i know what has happened I'm not afraid nor do i cry i stand there strongly beside my mother my stomach growling and my throat dry. a few more moons pass me by until i feel famished and weak and i noticed one thing, I've not eaten in a week. i walk down to a pond and saw me staring at me. and as i look down at my body i say " that's a sight i dont wanna see." i make my way back to the tent there's only a few people left alive. and with these harsh conditions..... no one will survive. one falls after the other starved and all worn out and last my mother falls and it's to God that i shout. "Why did you take her?" "Please dont leave me here alone" and at that very moment my spirit and body were gone.

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Date: 12/22/2009 12:10:00 PM
Congratulations on being a first round survivor and the best to you in the finals Hosea. I wish you the best in your writing endeavors in 2010 whatever they may be. Love, Carol
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Date: 12/21/2009 9:05:00 AM
Congrats on your poem winning the first round of PS contest!! Very well deserved, enjoyed reading your wonderful poetry. Here’s wishing you a very Merry Christmas and a Happy New Year!! May 2010 be your best year ever! Love Light Patty
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Date: 12/20/2009 10:17:00 AM
Many congratulations on reaching the second round with your fine poem >> James
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Date: 11/18/2009 11:18:00 AM
Many congrats on your fab poem being featured this week. Rgds Janette
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Date: 11/16/2009 11:46:00 AM
Congrats on feature poem this week! Love Light Patty
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Date: 11/16/2009 10:47:00 AM
Many congratulations on your poem being featured this week >> James
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Date: 11/16/2009 5:38:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week Hosea. I wish you the best in your writing endeavors. Love, Carol
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Date: 11/15/2009 10:28:00 PM
Congratulations on your being featured this week. Love, Iolanda
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Date: 11/15/2009 6:29:00 PM
No child should have to go through this. Unfortunately, it is reality for far too many. Gripping poem. Congratulations on having it featured. Wishing you continued success with your writing. Karen
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Date: 8/22/2009 7:42:00 AM
This is a wonderful, awesome piece; I love every bit of it. You are such a great poet. Please keep writing and congrats on your poem being featured this week. Hope to read more of your wonderful poems. You are great friend! Adeleke
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Date: 8/18/2009 12:08:00 PM
Congratulations on being featured>>James
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Date: 8/18/2009 9:45:00 AM
Congratulations Hosea, on having your poem featured this week. Loneliness can be worse than death and starvation is one of life's worse horrors. Good writing. Lovingly, DAS-J
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Date: 8/17/2009 4:48:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved poetry being featured this week Hosea. Love Carol
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