Death and Beyond

Open grave lies death door
festers corpse with rancid air 
igniting a flight.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Fowler Avatar
August 30, 2023 at 11:19 AM
Nicely dark, reminding me of the Grim Reaper. Great work Viviene!
Ramsay Avatar
August 23, 2023 at 8:08 PM
Thanks much Hiya and Tom. I appreciate the feedback. Best wishes.
Sharma  Avatar
August 23, 2023 at 7:39 PM
Oh, a brilliant carved dark haiku.. So bewitching.. The wordplay is phenomenal!
Ramsay Avatar
August 23, 2023 at 8:09 PM
Thanks Hiya.
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