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Death and Beyond

Open grave lies death door festers corpse with rancid air igniting a flight.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2023




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Date: 8/30/2023 11:19:00 AM
Nicely dark, reminding me of the Grim Reaper. Great work Viviene!
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Date: 8/23/2023 8:08:00 PM
Thanks much Hiya and Tom. I appreciate the feedback. Best wishes.
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Date: 8/23/2023 7:39:00 PM
Oh, a brilliant carved dark haiku.. So bewitching.. The wordplay is phenomenal!
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Viviene Ramsay
Date: 8/23/2023 8:09:00 PM
Thanks Hiya.
Date: 8/23/2023 12:47:00 PM
I think I'll skip that graveyard Viv
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Viviene Ramsay
Date: 8/23/2023 8:09:00 PM
Thanks Tom

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