Death - An Untold Truth Part 1

The only thing more achy
Is Death; it makes blurry
Our visions when in bevy
Of one’s funeral – body
Transformed sugar briny.
It makes a Hindu use billy;
Christians use box browny;
Uses soil a Pathan brawny;
Whoever may see be balky;
And wish to see any alley
To escape You O, Bonnie.
Then give apple or berry,
Or grapes or mango bossy.
Nothing tastes sweater, Honey
When Death tastes on you bonnie.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Dietrich Avatar
February 21, 2020 at 9:06 PM
I see you are really into monorhyme. Thought I would check out your very first poem. I appreciate your love for rhyme!
Lamoureux Avatar
March 12, 2018 at 9:27 AM
A great first offering to the soup. A belated welcome.
Jain Avatar
October 7, 2019 at 8:33 PM
Thanks for your appreciation. These words gave me new zest for writing. Thanks again.
White Avatar
March 24, 2017 at 3:04 PM
Wonderful monorhyme! So much depth in your first poem here. Welcome to PoetrySoup
Jain Avatar
October 11, 2017 at 2:44 PM
Wow! Obliged. Your inspiration gives great enthusiasm for Pari Style.
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