Constance La France Poet Verse

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Death

Snowy tombs
               quiet grace
angel 
         w
            e
              e
                 p
                   s

           agony stabs heart

                       t
                         e
                           a
                              r
                                s
                                     misty . . . 
             r o s e s   
azure decay-  words twine
                                               Mommy 

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December 19, 2017


Poetry/Free Verse/Death
Copyright Protected, ID 17-9741-91-0
All Rights Reserved.  Written Under Pseudonym.

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Poem of the Day week of December 10, 2017

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Darlene De Beaulieu January 18, 2018 at 6:19 PM I found this poem to be sad. Have a nice evening my friend.

James Inman January 18, 2018 at 6:51 AM Beautiful layout of painful words BW.

Sherry Beck January 17, 2018 at 2:32 PM POWERFUL! Congratulations!

Kudzai Mhangwa December 22, 2017 at 4:10 AM Beautiful poem! Congrats on POTD

Connie Marcum Wong December 22, 2017 at 12:27 AM Everything about this poem is excellent Constance! It deserves POTD! A fave from me! Congratulations! Happy Holidays! Blessings, Connie : )

Susan Ashley December 21, 2017 at 9:58 PM Congratulations on POTD honors with your beautifully sad write.

Anne-Lise Andresen December 21, 2017 at 3:12 PM - Really great, congratulations with p.o.t.d. - Best wishes for a peaceful and lovely Christmas to you and your family, B.W. - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jan Allison December 21, 2017 at 2:34 PM many congrats on POTD such a touching poem my friend:-) hugs Jan xx

Eve Roper December 21, 2017 at 11:49 AM Wonderful, Broken Wings, congratulations on POTD !

Charlie Smith December 21, 2017 at 10:50 AM Outstanding 5 word contest entry BW, congratulations on POTD honors...

Arturo Michael December 21, 2017 at 9:33 AM I knew this was really good...More than deserving...Congratulations Broken Wings... All the best

Silent One December 21, 2017 at 8:23 AM Congrats on POTD

Alexis Y. December 21, 2017 at 7:18 AM Hi BW, I'm just coming back to say congratulations on getting the poem of day. It was well deserved- Alexis

Vijay Pandit December 21, 2017 at 7:00 AM Congrats BW on POTD..quite creative!

Maria Williams December 21, 2017 at 5:24 AM Absolutely beautiful, your poetic words in this creative form. Imaginative to say the least. The best of luck in the contest, and congratulations on POTD. So well deserved...Maria

James Swartz December 21, 2017 at 3:34 AM Oh what a wonderful poem this is. The pain in each word is felt so strongly. Congratulations on POTD. And good luck in the contest this should do quite well.

FJ Thomas December 20, 2017 at 3:52 PM Broken Wings you were able to create such beauty within tragedy. This is amazing.

Beautiful Scars December 20, 2017 at 11:37 AM love where you took this. I found it took me a long time to write mine. You seem to write with such ease. This sadness comes from a place of sorrowful loneliness and that's why you are always a winner in my heart sweet lady...Good luck, reads like a winner to me! :)-luloo

Arturo Michael December 19, 2017 at 4:52 PM Very nice - Creativity flows - The standard of this contest has just blown the rooftops.Great one...

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart December 19, 2017 at 2:06 PM Oh wow. You did a phenomenal job with this one dear dear Poetess. I'll be surprised if you don't place first, you have my vote and best wishes. A fave. Much love! xomo

Alexis Y. December 19, 2017 at 2:03 PM BW, You did a good job with the five letter challenge. I found this write to be extremely sad. Losing a child is something I never want to experience in my life time. The imagery within this poem is on point. I could just picture the whole scene. Based on what I see its a winner. I wish you the best of luck in the contest- Alexis