Death

Tender touch of love drops we love so much
Knots of grief and joy in our conjoined bliss
A dreadful blow in our loss of life crutch
Ruthlessly snatched away by a death’s kiss

Our time bleeds in gray and black restlessness
No words of comfort, no dewdrop can cure
The long gloom of our hollow soul on face
The child in the man feels so insecure

The hand I held till yesterday with joy
Now holds the sun moon fountain and our sky
With amber power that none can destroy
In wings of blue birds fond memories fly

Miles after miles we have walked hand in hand
Now in my lonely time the grains of sand
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24/02/2017: A poem of condolence to a friend upon the death of his wife
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Ogbonna Avatar
March 29, 2017 at 12:42 AM
This is indeed an outstanding poem with a professional touch and excellent delicacy of language. Keep it up Probir, you are indeed talented.
Gupta Avatar
March 29, 2017 at 8:49 AM
Thank you ...
Agarwala Avatar
March 27, 2017 at 8:24 PM
A touching poem on death. Liked it very much!
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March 27, 2017 at 10:04 PM
Thank you ...
Rodd Avatar
March 12, 2017 at 8:21 AM
There's such grace that flows from your pen! A beautiful poem.
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March 12, 2017 at 10:05 AM
Thank you ...
Vaso Avatar
March 11, 2017 at 7:11 PM
So sad, so heartfelt, well done!
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March 11, 2017 at 7:43 PM
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Roper Avatar
February 25, 2017 at 9:00 PM
Wonderful poem, Probir, death is so very hard to cope with all the sorrow it brings.. you're a very good friend
Gupta Avatar
February 26, 2017 at 5:27 AM
Thank you, Eve ... I try to be ... but do not always succeed ...
Vinson Avatar
February 24, 2017 at 4:49 PM
Cheers, Probir. It is a hard time to come up with the right words, yet you did excellently. Beautiful and thought-provoking last line.
Gupta Avatar
February 25, 2017 at 7:59 AM
Thank you ...
Murray Avatar
February 24, 2017 at 4:47 PM
So beautifully comforting Probir. How sweet of you.
Gupta Avatar
February 25, 2017 at 8:00 AM
Thank you ...
Alhemaidy Avatar
February 24, 2017 at 1:05 PM
Love ya :) A7. This site has many neat poets.
Gupta Avatar
February 25, 2017 at 8:01 AM
Thank you ...
Sands Avatar
February 24, 2017 at 7:43 AM
Very nice poem of condolence, Probir!
Gupta Avatar
February 24, 2017 at 7:56 AM
Thank you ...
Trifiatis Avatar
February 24, 2017 at 5:57 AM
A glorious poem my friend, Probir! You have captured all parameters of death! I have written on the same subject a trilogy! A seven!
Gupta Avatar
February 24, 2017 at 6:55 AM
Thank you ...
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