Death

Death Who is no respecter of persons Beloved, haters Gather around Secluded murmurs and vents Bloodshot corneas Shudders, silence Some to merry only Black, oblivion Disbelief, later epiphany Resounding salutations Indeed! Some only to make merry - come Its desire: unquenchable Like the Queen, never late Departing she returns Again without announcement.

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Noel Tonka

Date: 4/3/2016 6:30:00 AM

Thanks guys! It feels good to be home. I hope to better myself with your guide. I appreciate.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 4/2/2016 6:03:00 PM

Noel, Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@

Noel Tonka
Date: 4/3/2016 6:34:00 AM

Thanks for the very warm welcome. Looking up your poems? Definitely!