Death

eyes and blood
all over my face
am i dead really, really dead.
but why do i still 
see your laugh inside my head
that same very day
you pushed me around
like i was your toy doll
doe it have to be this way
for you to hurt others
while i just sit back and hide
in your shadows
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Shines Avatar
April 17, 2013 at 8:05 AM
nice write
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April 16, 2013 at 5:01 PM
Haleigh :-) . Stopping by to wish you a nice warm welcome to the Poetry Soup. Wishing you the best in your writings. I hope you find this community one of the best here on the net. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets, and myself? If you ever want or need feedback on any given poem, please feel free and look me up by clicking on my name anytime you see it.. Luv~*~SKAT
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April 12, 2013 at 8:09 AM
Powerful and very descriptive-- taking a stand on abuse. Great write!! Welcome to P/Soup
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