Death

Time fell fast 
Things became hard
Worries were vast
Lives begain scared

Hopes endlessly hidden
All things seemed forbidden
Days filled with darkness
Lives consumed and left sparkless

Awaiting the doom
Sitting only in gloom
Heaven wept
No souls were kept
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Nguyen Avatar
July 17, 2012 at 1:00 AM
Could be a much better poem if more heart and effort were put into it. Regardless, its essence as a poem can be salvaged if the author wants to rescue it from its current state.
Courtney Avatar
July 18, 2012 at 1:25 AM
maybe next time I like it
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