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Death

On that fateful night at ten I saw you walking down the lane Your hand was on her shoulder And there was spring in your step I stood on the terrace watching you go Fear clutching at my heart The reality of it all came on me The hope within died a sudden death I waited for the tears to come I waited for the pain to begin But the tears had frozen to ice And the heart had turned to stone Time went by And life regained its normal course Hard and cruel they called me And a statue I became Then on a cold winter morn Came a gust of warm wind The dark, kind and lively eyes And the circle of soothing arms My cheeks became wet My heart went a pit-pat I could smell the earth again And hear the birds sing But the harsh winter froze the warm wind And the frost began to settle Passerby looking at me would say She is not dying…….. she is dead.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 4/20/2011 5:07:00 AM
Deeply intense write Tahera my friend and such expressive words on Death.. intricate lines in this piece present beautiful insight to the reaction of this event.. if for a contest ..good luck.. this is winning material luv.. wishing u a most blessed and Happy Easter celebration ...
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Date: 4/19/2011 11:57:00 PM
Wow! You have captured the emotions of a distrought soul...badgered by the onslaught of criticisms and various other abuses, but having survived physical death by building a great wall of strength...standing alone. Spring will bring that warmth again, amid the flowers and dreams revived...I hope. Forgivness helps! Wonderful poetry.
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Date: 4/19/2011 9:22:00 PM
How very sad ! well written though...describes much angst..love,Deb
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