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As I kneel beside you My emotions are overwhelming My anger is like a wild raging fire My pain is eating me alive But my sorrow, is just too much to handle I want to fight for you, but I cannot All I can do is watch Watch you slip away Your last breath is like a knife Being plunged into my heart A knife, I can never remove As I hold your limp body in my arms I cry uncontrollably My tears washing over your cold, pale face I collapse beside you Drained of everything I have I am fading with you Except I will return Without you

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Date: 10/29/2010 9:23:00 AM
Much pain in your poems. Keep writing. Let loose on paper. Never Never Never put your eyes down for anyone. Vince
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Date: 10/5/2010 1:59:00 PM
hi Amy [my email is [] kind regards duncan
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Date: 10/1/2010 12:59:00 PM
Awesome ending ... the truth rings like a bell to capture the vulnerability and the emptiness with death.
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Date: 9/28/2010 6:07:00 AM
Wow, powerful write, I am sorry for your loss.. my sympathy....always Michael
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