Death

Dieing naturally, reluctantly, or willingly Essence of fate, the end of life Ascending to the heavens or descending to hell To afterlife, to happiness Home again with your deceased loved ones

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Jay Loveless

Date: 9/23/2009 9:47:00 AM

Lexi Love, why have you ONLY eaten 61 tootsie rolls? and please tell me they werent chocolate cause those are just nasty...oh and um haha yeah sorry, awesome poem. friggin amazing kid. (dotn get offended like some guys i call EVERYONE despite age, kid) Need ta read more. addicting lol. ~Raiin

Ali Matheny

Date: 11/7/2008 9:56:00 AM

I love it!! Dude all I've eaten today is tootsie rolls and tootsie pops, 61 each. . .

Raul Moreno

Date: 11/7/2008 1:11:00 AM

Nice acrostic, death is a part of life and you balanced it well in this poem. The opposites of ascending and descending was powerful and the added hint of happiness also concluding it with seeing each other again, good poem.