Death

Dieing naturally, reluctantly, or willingly
Essence of fate, the end of life
Ascending to the heavens or descending to hell
To afterlife, to happiness
Home again with your deceased loved ones
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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Loveless Avatar
September 23, 2009 at 9:47 AM
Lexi Love, why have you ONLY eaten 61 tootsie rolls? and please tell me they werent chocolate cause those are just nasty...oh and um haha yeah sorry, awesome poem. friggin amazing kid. (dotn get offended like some guys i call EVERYONE despite age, kid) Need ta read more. addicting lol. ~Raiin
Matheny Avatar
November 7, 2008 at 9:56 AM
I love it!! Dude all I've eaten today is tootsie rolls and tootsie pops, 61 each. . .
Moreno Avatar
November 7, 2008 at 1:11 AM
Nice acrostic, death is a part of life and you balanced it well in this poem. The opposites of ascending and descending was powerful and the added hint of happiness also concluding it with seeing each other again, good poem.
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