Death

Come, look beyond the waters
Their bodies floating ashore
Young as their faces shown
Water washes afloat her hair
Black as the night
And in her hands she held
A locket of gold, engraved
With eternal words, those of love
Says his heart, placed on hers
With this day, that has gone
Along with his words
Under the skies, they cried,
Tears fell, as it rained
Bringing with them, sorrow
For all to mourn
He lay there beside her
Holding her to him, 
His eyes shown, a light,
From beyond, a stare
As cold, as the waters,
Their love had lasted,
As long as the candle blown.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008



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Date: 6/13/2009 10:25:00 AM
Reem - Congratulations on having your poetry featured this week – God Bless, MJ
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Date: 6/12/2009 2:56:00 AM
Congratulations on being featured. Its a sad poem but well written from your heart, I like it. Keep it up =)
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Date: 6/8/2009 3:06:00 PM
Creative view on a sad time. The emotion comes through your words. Congratulations on having your poem featured. I wish you continued success with your writing. Karen
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Date: 6/8/2009 1:39:00 PM
Congrats Reem on the featuring of "Death." Vince
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Date: 6/8/2009 8:18:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved poem being featured this week Reem. Love, Carol
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