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Dear Wambo

Mambo (hi) I talked to mum and brother and they say you are not doing well Mum says the last time she saw you, you were better She says you are worse now Your once clear eyes, are now yellow Auntie showed me a message you posted three weeks ago on whatsapp Before you went to India You sounded so hopeful India couldn't do anything for, you are at terminal stage A topic we hardly talk about because of your age But we have too There is no time left too The only time we have,is to love My most memories of you, of us Is when I was entering puberty I remember embarrassingly asking you about pubic hair, breasts, adams apple In my homescience assignments You were so good at answering them You were so good at teaching me that new world I was about to enter You were a great mentor And those chapatis, OMG! I remember your cooking lessons You were so good at making that bread With it, we were well fed Thank you for being an awesome cousin The only time we have, is to love

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 7/27/2015 2:31:00 AM
Njeri, I hope you don't mind but I am just looking through you back catalogue. I have only been on the soup since the end of June. This is really a lovely tribute, very moving and feelings I am familiar with. Kind regards Ian
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Njeri Hunjeri
Date: 7/27/2015 3:50:00 AM
wow. i dont know how to thank you for reading my poems. i will return the favor too. because id also love to know you more:-)
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Ian Jones
Date: 7/27/2015 2:51:00 AM
I will slowly go through the list as you seem to have similar experiences and I am interested in your view point and how you express it. If you find the thought of a steady stream of comments intimidating please let me know and I will just read them. Kind regards, Ian
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Njeri Hunjeri
Date: 7/27/2015 2:42:00 AM
I dont mind at all. Since her death i havent been able to read this poem. She died of pancreatic cancer. I wrote 2-3 other poems after her death. 1. I miss you and 2. Gone too soon. Thank u Ian and God bless
Date: 2/17/2015 7:39:00 AM
A super 7 for this heartfelt poem. I agree with the previous comment, very dignified writing. Draws the reader in and eases into the readers heart! That's poetry!!
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Njeri Hunjeri
Date: 2/18/2015 4:03:00 PM
Thank you for your comment Robert. It means a lot. Blessings
Date: 2/15/2015 3:52:00 PM
Enchantingly lovely...and dignified! :) john.
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Njeri Hunjeri
Date: 2/18/2015 4:01:00 PM
Thank you John

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