Melissa Tracy Poet Rhyme

Dear Santa I Want a Batmobile

Dear Santa I want a batmobile that can fly
I want to go way up above the sky
You probably think it's silly and are asking yourself, why?
You see I've got to get to heaven so it has to go real high
Don't get the wrong impression, I don't want to die 
I wish to meet a couple grandparents,for them mom and dad do cry
They say they'd love me and wish I could have met them as they let out a sigh
If I can't have a batmobile I'll settle for a set of wings,just bring me something that can fly

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Keith O.J. Hunt January 13, 2018 at 3:47 PM Very witty, enjoyed muchly Melissa;-) Melissa Tracy January 13, 2018 at 9:05 PM Thank you, Keith! I'm glad you enjoyed it :) Best wishes!

Line Gauthier January 2, 2018 at 10:45 AM That's totally adorable. Superbly done. A FAVE for me. Thanks. Melissa Tracy January 3, 2018 at 8:06 AM Thank you so much, Line! I'm glad you enjoyed it :) Best wishes to you!

Jannie Breedt January 2, 2018 at 5:14 AM Hi Melissa , congratulations on your achievement. You should some leathers with that batmobile. Come fetch me , we can fly. Hugs Jannie Melissa Tracy January 3, 2018 at 7:57 AM Thanks, Jannie! Imagine the crazy fun that would be and all the endless possibilities! Hugs to you as well! Jannie Breedt January 2, 2018 at 5:15 AM ...wear some leathers .. sorry

Kim Rodrigues December 29, 2017 at 10:01 PM Cute one! Melissa Tracy December 31, 2017 at 8:56 PM Thanks, Kim! Best wishes :)

Sneha Rv December 29, 2017 at 8:32 PM So unique and sweet.. Congrats on your lovely win!! :) Melissa Tracy December 31, 2017 at 8:55 PM Thank you and best wishes:)

Agnes Krampe December 29, 2017 at 3:52 PM Congrats on your win, Melissa. Melissa Tracy December 31, 2017 at 8:53 PM Thanks, Agnes! Best wishes :)

Eve Roper December 29, 2017 at 1:13 PM Congratulations on your win, Melissa.. Will get to anyone's heart. Hugs eve Melissa Tracy December 31, 2017 at 8:52 PM Thanks, Eve! Best wishes and hugs to you as well:)

Jan Allison December 29, 2017 at 1:04 PM Such a touching poem, congrats on your win Melissa:-) hugs jan x Melissa Tracy December 31, 2017 at 8:47 PM Thank you, Jan! Hugs and best wishes to you as well :)

Viv Wigley December 29, 2017 at 11:29 AM Well done, Melissa, can I borrow your Batmobile when you're finished with it? Viv x Melissa Tracy December 31, 2017 at 8:45 PM Thanks, Viv! I'd say take her for a spin but apparently didn't quite make the nice list...better luck next year ;) Best wishes!

Curtis Johnson December 29, 2017 at 10:19 AM Hi Melissa. So touching. I can see and feel that emotional moment as one generation tells another generation about the other generation. ....they'd love me....; Wow! Congrats on your placement. Much love my friend. Melissa Tracy December 31, 2017 at 8:40 PM Thank you, Curtis! So important to be in touch with our roots and pass down traditions and stories from one generation to the next. Best wishes to you :)

CayCay Godwin December 29, 2017 at 9:07 AM I love the sweetness behind your wish, very touching. Congratulations on your placement! All the best ... CayCay Melissa Tracy December 31, 2017 at 8:37 PM Thank you, CayCay! Best wishes to you :)

Arturo Michael December 14, 2017 at 4:26 AM Sweet...All the best Melissa Melissa Tracy December 14, 2017 at 10:21 AM Thank you! Best wishes to you as well Arturo :)