Seren Roberts Poet Rhyme

Dear Santa I Want

Dear Santa "I want", I wrote one day
Knowing just what mother would say
You don't say," I want" but "please may I"
For things you would like,...will give it a try

Santa I would like a puppy or two
Promise to feed it and pick  up the poo
So, can I have, I want, I really need
A wriggly puppy getting so excited it peed

Penned 4/12/2017

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Jan Allison December 24, 2017 at 6:50 PM just be extra careful when you are scooping the poop Seren!!! Happy Christmas and have a wonderful 2018:-) hugs Jan xx Seren Roberts December 24, 2017 at 7:13 PM Yes u could end up with a broken arm lol

Richard Lamoureux December 23, 2017 at 3:52 PM So cute! Seren Roberts December 23, 2017 at 4:12 PM Hi Richard so nice to see you again . Thanks for stopping by....Seren

Eve Roper December 19, 2017 at 8:11 PM :-) Love it! Hugs Eve

Jan Allison December 10, 2017 at 7:00 PM ha ha ha I was always told I want doesn't get - this made me smile Seren:-) hugs Jan xx

Sara Ella December 3, 2017 at 9:54 PM Seren, this is a fun one! :D I can just her "mother's voice" and all the excitement a wriggly puppy can bring.

CayCay Godwin December 3, 2017 at 6:57 PM And, did you get it young lady and only care for him until the novelty wore off? (can you hear my Mother voice?) This is so cute, I see it as a poem tied in a red bow. All the best ... CayCay Seren Roberts December 23, 2017 at 4:13 PM Lol I don't think so....Seren