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Dear Santa, will you make my dream come true? Although a little costly it may be, I still believe there’s nothing you can’t do. So could you please provide a cruise for me? I’m not too picky. Any cruise is fun. However, there’s a plan I wish to hatch. It has to be a cruise with everyone who matters most to me, so that’s the catch! To take a cruise is easy, but whether my sisters, spouse, grown kids, best friends and mom could somehow at the same time come together would prove quite hard, yet it would be the bomb! I know that it’s a lot to ask because a little naughty this past year I was! A little naughty this past year I was. I told my friend unneccessary things, but no one gets me like a best friend does, and so few share the comfort each one brings me when I’m feeling down, and there are days I blab too much. I fear I’m pestering good friends who must endure my whiny ways. Releasing woes, I stop their festering! I’m also lazy, for I hate to do my housework. I would rather watch tv, and there are projects I do not get through, for I’m online or writing poetry! Dear Santa, is my naughtiness too bad? At least I try not to make people sad. At least I try not to make people sad. I try to always live the Golden Rule. I don’t go out and follow every fad. I think I do good working at the school. I simply want a cruise with family and also with best friends online I’ve met. I’ve made great friends through poetry, you see, but face to face we have not talked as yet. To eat, see shows, do kareoke, dance, and tour with those most precious, one and all, would be a dream! I have but this one chance. Is this an order, Santa, much too tall? I’d love this cruise. My life it would renew! Dear Santa, will you make my dream come true? Dec. 27, 2017 for Phillip Garcia's "From Your Lips To Santa's Ears" Contest (These are done like a min-crown of sonnets, which to me is much nicer than having to write a lot more sonnets than three!)

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Date: 7/3/2018 10:09:00 PM
Ohhh this is so sweet in so many different ways. Congratulations on your win. I'd love to do a cruise like, or even just a meet somewhere.
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Date: 7/3/2018 7:11:00 AM
Back with most deserved congrats on your podium finish, Andrea.
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Date: 4/10/2018 6:12:00 PM
A fun read. Make sure I'm on that list, Andrea.
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Date: 1/4/2018 4:57:00 AM
How I would love to make your wish come true Andrea.
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Date: 12/29/2017 9:05:00 AM
Lovely wish made into not one but 3 sonnets. May all your wishes come true, you deserve them.
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Date: 12/29/2017 6:06:00 AM
uhm ... sorry little girl ... Santa's only boat was the "titanic" ... boat ship canoe raft ... same ... frozen under water ... drove the sleigh 7,000 miles deep ... reindeer started counting sheep ... Rudolphs nose started strutting dolphin radiation ... my beard was frozen to yo Blitzers horn ... we must escape this dive into the deep ... flying squirrels are here to ... jellyfish stalking cap for you ... now where were we ... wait a minute what am we doing here ... Oh yeah ... alluding ...
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Date: 12/28/2017 9:57:00 PM
Indeed a lovely wish for the renewal of life ... Three enjoyable sonnets ... wonderful ...
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Date: 12/28/2017 2:53:00 PM
Andrea, hope your dreams come true. Good luck in the contest. John
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Date: 12/28/2017 1:39:00 PM
The middle sonnet speaks a great deal to me. We feel we blab too much but we most desperately need to talk to our friend. Loved it all, my mischievous merry poetry sister! Big hugs (Kim)
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Date: 12/28/2017 1:23:00 PM
Three sweet sonnets Andrea.. You do this form very well...
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Date: 12/28/2017 8:21:00 AM
This is fun, Andrea. I love the wish, and I don't think you were too naughty :)
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Date: 12/28/2017 7:59:00 AM
While Santa is sailing out to sea, On a cruise, my wife is mad at me; And a desire, Wants to inspire; Not home, but sea would rather be.
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Date: 12/28/2017 7:58:00 AM
Magnificent undertaking executed so well..may your wish come true, Andrea..I believe this poem will win top spot.
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Date: 12/27/2017 10:24:00 PM
Aww how lovely! You make the form seem so easy. All the best in the contest :)
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Date: 12/27/2017 7:54:00 PM
It is precious, beyond cute and I want to know where we are going! It's like what we talked about, getting together. Please explain 'min-crown' vs. reg, is it syllable count? This is truly delightful, Andrea, and, cough cough, should cruise to the top of the list! Love ... CayCay
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Date: 12/27/2017 7:23:00 PM
I want the same , but without the family friends are ok. We are all at fault being naughty :) hehe. .I hope your wish comes true... Hubby won't take me on one not because of money , he seems to think i'll get sea sick. I'm want the same as Jan.. good luck in the contest. Hugs Eve ~`*
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Date: 12/27/2017 7:21:00 PM
Wonderful Andrea... I wish your dream come true...Just asking is the first step in making it happen... All the best
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Date: 12/27/2017 6:38:00 PM
Hey Andrea I hope Santa grants you your wish and If you do get to go on the cruise can you find my muse, pack her suitcase and send her back to me lol:-) Good luck in the contest:-) hugs jan xx
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Caycay Jennings
Date: 12/27/2017 7:55:00 PM
You are coming with even if the ship doesn't serve brussel sprouts. CayCay

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