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Dear Santa, I miss my mommy; daddy says she's up in heaven. And I wanted to write to you and let you know I've turned seven. Santa, I don't want any toy, I want one of my mommy's hugs. My daddy says I'm a good boy, and I promise not to do drugs. Please Santa if Rudolph guides you can you fetch mommy with your sleigh? For if you can do that for me I'd be so grateful, Christmas day! I know that my dad still loves me because he hugs me real tight. But Santa, I miss my mommy tucking me into bed at night. So Santa, please, please, please, ask God if mommy can come back with you. And I promise that I'll be good and leave you milk and cookies too. (Quatrain) 12/7/2017

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Date: 5/31/2018 1:09:00 PM
What a beautifully emotive poem, Emile.
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Date: 12/10/2017 1:37:00 PM
Break my heart! Ugh. Hopefully this is pure fiction.
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Date: 12/10/2017 5:49:00 PM
Thanks so much Anna, be at peace my friend this is pure fiction, Emile.

Book: Shattered Sighs