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Dear Past Me

Dear past me, Who smiles so bright? Who has always spread her wings, And taken flight. Your eyes are shining blue like the sea, Looks like you are; As happy as can be. Dear present me, Why are you so sad, Has something gone wrong? Something gone bad, Looks like you have lost your way. And you may never, Live another day. Dear future me, I hope you are well, And I hope you are alive. I hope you smile so everyone can tell; That you've made it past. The good and the bad, And you've finally won this battle at last.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 3/5/2017 6:41:00 AM
So sweet Tierra !! Really enjoyed--It sounds so simple and easy----life----though is anything but.... ~~ Jeanie ~~
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Date: 3/2/2017 10:58:00 AM
Nicely communicated....Liked the concept of addressing the past, present and future....Cheers !
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Date: 2/20/2017 9:36:00 AM
Very wise. :)
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Date: 2/19/2017 7:05:00 AM
Oh, how wonderful you wrote that, in three parts, past, present and future! I am sorry you are sad right now, but you painted your future so hopeful, I wish the best for you. Welcome to PoetrySoup with your first beautiful poem :)
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Date: 2/18/2017 4:38:00 PM
Welcome to PS. Very nice first poem. Very lovely lines. Have a nice day here.
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