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Dear My Love

Dear my LOVE, HELLO and goodbye for tonight WE DRIP INTO MIDNIGHT. and the hands those hands tear us A A T P R mylovemylovemylove the mantra repeats itself iloveyouiloveyouiloveyou drowning out the broken rhythm of THE HEART. But tonight, I cannot stay FOR MIDNIGHT CALLS and you must not follow. B R O K HEARTS N and the story of a LONELY girl

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Date: 5/23/2009 8:36:00 PM
well done!! Nice visual in the mix of such heartfelt words. Keep writing my friend :) I love the line "we drip into midnight" ... just awesome.
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Date: 5/23/2009 10:43:00 AM
LONINESS CONSUMES ONES BEING WE MUST NOT LET IT TAKE US OVER YOU WILL FIND LOVE LONG PASSIONATE LOVE MY DEAR FRIEND KEEP WRITING
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