Rhia Madison Thomer Poet Free verse

Dear My Love

Dear my LOVE,
                   HELLO
and goodbye

for tonight

        WE DRIP INTO MIDNIGHT.
and the hands
those hands
tear
             us       A     A    T
                           P    R

mylovemylovemylove
the mantra repeats itself
iloveyouiloveyouiloveyou
drowning out the broken rhythm of 
THE HEART.

But tonight,

I cannot stay

FOR MIDNIGHT CALLS
and you must not follow.

B
  R
    O
      K
       HEARTS
           N
and the story of a 
LONELY girl

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Izzy Gumbo May 23, 2009 at 8:36 PM well done!! Nice visual in the mix of such heartfelt words. Keep writing my friend :) I love the line "we drip into midnight" ... just awesome.

Brandy Megens May 23, 2009 at 10:43 AM LONINESS CONSUMES ONES BEING WE MUST NOT LET IT TAKE US OVER YOU WILL FIND LOVE LONG PASSIONATE LOVE MY DEAR FRIEND KEEP WRITING