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Dear Moon

Open doth my soul and thine own breath bequeath for here in this realm of mine, none else exists gage me in dear moon, for I hunger here beneath the ribboning rays of blue, come be my Deist Open doth my mind and thine own thoughts ingrace for over there the world is whole again no wars, no diseases, no hatred of men on each face sewing stars on God's breast, let us whisper Amen ! Open doth my heart and through thine own hold true like the northward river of cane that flows through me keep me aligned to your light and I will never be blue as long as I have you close, I will always be free Open doth my soul and thine own breath bequeath gage me in dear moon, for I hunger here beneath

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Date: 1/14/2024 5:11:00 PM
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Date: 1/8/2024 4:45:00 PM
you've made me wonder what living on the moon would be like...is it possible to live someplace where no wars, no diseases, no hatred of men. If that be the moon, then beam me up Scotty. Seriously your Sonnet was captivating and comforting, Rose. Have a great evening, PS Faving!
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Date: 1/8/2024 11:40:00 AM
Nice use of the old English language in your sonnet that flows and rhymes so well.. so many lovely verses my friend..
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Mystic Rose Rose
Date: 1/8/2024 1:20:00 PM
Thank you for reading S O, always a pleasure to know your thoughts :)
Date: 1/8/2024 6:07:00 AM
Open doth my soul and thine own breath bequeath gage me in dear moon, for I hunger here beneath --what a lovely poem and awesome conclusion!
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Mystic Rose Rose
Date: 1/8/2024 1:20:00 PM
Thank you for reading Vijay, so many times I wonder what it would be like to live on the moon lol,
Date: 1/8/2024 5:23:00 AM
Oh my, dear Rose, this is such a beautiful poem, where you've described the longing for peace and solace in a truly heart-touching way.. Although, your words reflect a wishful yearning to live in a place which is free from suffering, but I can feel an emotive depth here, as if, the soul is tired of being resilient amidst darkness and now is wholeheartedly trying to chase those flickers of hope that tend to escape from our view.. I like the archaic touch that you've given here, a beautiful sonnet
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Mystic Rose Rose
Date: 1/8/2024 1:20:00 PM
The moon captures many a soul, and when we are looking for comfort, no greater place to hand our hearts then our infamous moon ..
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Hiya Sharma
Date: 1/8/2024 5:24:00 AM
Absolutely loved reading this, sending you so much light & many best wishes with smiles ~

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