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Dear Mister Sun

Oh dear dear Mr. Sun, where have you gone The giver of life that returns every dawn Providing warmth Outperforms Every celestial body, but freaking hot thereon

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 5/2/2017 4:48:00 PM
Oh sun where have you gone? It is cold outside today Come out to warm me I love your poem.Hugs.
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Jack Ellison
Date: 5/2/2017 5:43:00 PM
Hello dear Darlene! Are you feeling warmer??? LOL You wouldn't be from Canada would you? Love and hugs, Jacko xxx
Date: 5/2/2017 8:20:00 AM
Nothing better than the sun//Used to be something fun//I liked to do//Remember it too?//Don't do it now, I am done. SHINE ON JACKSON!!!
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Jack Ellison
Date: 5/2/2017 8:26:00 AM
Old Mr.Sol makes us feel alive! Cloudy days should be outlawed... whatcha think? HAVE A GREAT DAY JOHN JOHN!!!

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