Dear Miss Dishwater

Just for you,I stayed away from
a guys' night- out of cool poker;
even prevented myself from having
the pleasure of beer on the couch.
But while my hands poured detergent,
ten times over, all I heard were rambles
and gurgles while the plates kept
their oil around the edges. Yes, I tried
to fix your waistline filled with grease,
the pipe clogged from old age. 

Serving me well, we both knew
it was time to mark you as junk;
sorry about this, I rang the cargo
man as my hands were beginning 
to ache from arthritis.My insight
tried to think without being so 
introspective; smudges and a
big loss of fun hours with the boys
made me decide to let you go.
Did I tell you my wife went out
tonight with the girls? And I am left 
hanging on to piles of kitchenware,
just you and I on a dreary Saturday.


101 in a ROW contest -6
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Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Raven Avatar
July 23, 2016 at 6:30 PM
Hi Jajosh, congratulations on your win in the contest. I enjoyed the read....Mike.
Onclaud Avatar
July 23, 2016 at 4:33 PM
lol, now this really deserves a win!.. congrats, mr. cleaner..huggs
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July 23, 2016 at 1:25 PM
Jajosh nice win...Hope to see you stop by my blog *Female Spirit* always and forever ~Linda~
Allison Avatar
September 13, 2015 at 2:07 PM
loved the personification Jajosh good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx
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