Dear John, Deer Lady

On the forest edge young beautiful and wild                                                             though you call singing of love, so subtly mild                                                                 with your long dark locks you offer caress                                                                   Doe’s eyes all a mist and cleaving breast                                                                       So often, did I failed the test when I was young                                                        leaping upon chance take the dance then run                                                                  On the forest edge young beautiful and wild                                                             though you call singing, so inviting you smiled                                                            Growing wiser in this world of so many tracks                                                             some to better days, some you never come back,                                                          So now I know where I and you have trod                                                                       behind I see skin deep beauty something odd                                                                    On the forest edge young beautiful and wild                                                                    I reject you now, your offer of love is standing wiled                                                        So the younger may learn not to follow your wind rose                                                 Show them who you are a wolf wearing deer clothes                                                  Tearing many a young  men’s heart, running like a hart                                             singing of love so subtly mild, smiling teeth bloody tart                                                   On the forest edge young beautiful and wild                                                                mended heart running true for I am God’s child
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Date: 2/22/2014 4:11:00 PM
wow, a strong message in this one. Great symbolic poetry!
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Date: 2/22/2014 6:43:00 PM
Thanks Andrea and Deer woman is very interesting tale to teach moral truths
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