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Dear Jane

coming back to the sunset after leaving the wilderness of nostalgia she wasn't afraid to leave-- for once now Dear Jane, please: spark a flame! spark a flame! into the road where you felt lost.

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Chris Green

Date: 4/21/2017 12:57:00 PM

Another cool piece. This has a song like feel to it. I read it several times and each time the flowing cadence of your words played a melodic tune in my head. Which I will say, based on the abstract form of the poem, I would not have expected.

Trisha Romano
Date: 4/21/2017 1:03:00 PM

Wow, thank you very much. I'm a huge music lover and a former musician so music has had a strong influence in my poetry.