Dear I Left Flowers

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Dear I Left Flowers My dear we were once madly in love, I thought Then why didn't we both tie the knot To think of the dreams you tear The love that you fear We matched well Dear All was swell My car was in gear But you walked far than near You left for that lowlife all for naught My dear we were once madly in love, I thought 1/18/23 Writing Challenge - Andaree Form - Poetry Contest Sponsor-Constance La France 2nd

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 2/5/2023 11:47:00 PM

Congratulations on this winning work. Way to go. Sara

Constance La France

Date: 2/4/2023 7:08:00 AM

Connie, an emotional write and congratulations on your win in my Writing Challenge, Andaree form, well done, I like the image also, Constance

Fj Thomas

Date: 1/30/2023 5:24:00 PM

Oh, this was a sad one Connie, but I can see why it placed. How are you doing over there?

Fj Thomas
Date: 1/31/2023 2:50:00 PM

Same here, still no motivation of my own so writing from prompts. But still writing :)

Connie Pachecho
Date: 1/30/2023 9:08:00 PM

I'm doing fine. Been planting a few poems here and there, nuturing them, but it's always the sunlight that makes them grow. Thank you.

Elizabeth Mccann

Date: 1/19/2023 1:37:00 PM

Your words catch the feeling exactly, especially the last line, "in love, I thought." A sadness, a puzzle, still unanswered. Elizabeth

Connie Pachecho
Date: 1/25/2023 6:07:00 PM

Thank You!