Connie Pachecho Poet Rhyme

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Dear I Left Flowers

Dear I Left Flowers


My dear we were once madly in love, I thought

Then why didn't we both tie the knot

To think of the dreams you tear

The love that you fear

We matched well

Dear

All was swell

My car was in gear

But you walked far than near

You left for that lowlife all for naught

My dear we were once madly in love, I thought


1/18/23

Writing Challenge - Andaree Form - Poetry Contest

Sponsor-Constance La France

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Sara Kendrick February 5, 2023 at 11:47 PM Congratulations on this winning work. Way to go. Sara

Constance La France February 4, 2023 at 7:08 AM Connie, an emotional write and congratulations on your win in my Writing Challenge, Andaree form, well done, I like the image also, Constance

FJ Thomas January 30, 2023 at 5:24 PM Oh, this was a sad one Connie, but I can see why it placed. How are you doing over there? FJ Thomas January 31, 2023 at 2:50 PM Same here, still no motivation of my own so writing from prompts. But still writing :) Connie Pachecho January 30, 2023 at 9:08 PM I'm doing fine. Been planting a few poems here and there, nuturing them, but it's always the sunlight that makes them grow. Thank you.

Elizabeth Mccann January 19, 2023 at 1:37 PM Your words catch the feeling exactly, especially the last line, "in love, I thought." A sadness, a puzzle, still unanswered. Elizabeth Connie Pachecho January 25, 2023 at 6:07 PM Thank You!