Dear I Don'T Know

Dear I don't know,

       I'm here in a place, I should call my castle
 The problem with this is, I don't feel it's paradise
 For, I sit alone, so many days and nights
 Sometimes I cry, and don't know, why
 Nor, know how to stop my fear
 Due to the burning knives
 I feel so deep in my spine

  I keep trying to find, the happiness
  I once carried in my soul, but it
  Seems so hard to find
  Were did it disappear to
  Were did it go

   For, I'm so lost in this world
   Don't know, what to do
   I just know, I am writing to you
   Hoping you can give me a clue
   Because, I don't know
   What to do
   Life left me so confuse

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012



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Date: 10/12/2012 1:58:00 PM
‡ Afore I Fail To Mention Unto Your Precious And Gifted Beauty, Your Treasures Are Now Joyfully, Amid My Faves. ‡
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Date: 10/12/2012 1:46:00 PM
‡ Writing Such Things As These Moments Inside Out, Definitely Are Good Therapy But Not An Answer I Do Not Believe. I Was In A Place Somewhat As Perhaps This, Beautiful Delilah, But Mercy Reached Deep And Touched My Tiny Life. I Only See Beyound The Dust Now. You Are Such A Beautiful Poetess As I View Your Heart Upon The Page. You Are Absolutely Stunning Also. Have A Beautiful Day, Love, Rachel ‡
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