Dear Heart

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Oh, my dear heart, within your beating rhythm my serenity dwells; I mend you from falling apart, as old memories my soul retells. Because of you blood flows and I am healthy and thrive, remember when once we almost did not survive; we fought with courage and strength to be alive, I love you dear heart ! _____________________ January 28, 2023 Poetry/Rhyme/Dear Heart Copyright Protected, ID 01-1520-820-28 All Rights Reserved, 2023, Constance La France Written for the Pemiere contest, Dear Heart sponsor, Mystic Rose Rose, Judged 01/30/2023 Rhyming verified on RhymeZone

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Edward Ibeh

Date: 2/15/2023 2:27:00 PM

I smiled through this write because it felt somewhat like a poem TO your former self, Constance:-) Teehee! Enjoyed.

Constance La France
Date: 2/15/2023 9:10:00 PM

Edward, thank you so much for the visit, yes, it was like writing to my former self, Dear Heart but I had to begin writing under my own name, blessings Constance

Sally Eslinger

Date: 2/2/2023 8:58:00 AM

Constance, so much love and so many instances of love come to mind inspired by this poem. Touching. Eloquent.

Constance La France
Date: 2/2/2023 2:02:00 PM

Dear Sally, thank you so much for the visit, comment and compliment, blessings ~Constance

Bj Legros Kelley

Date: 1/31/2023 12:09:00 AM

Precious! We love your dear heart too Constance <3 :)

Constance La France
Date: 1/31/2023 6:03:00 AM

Dear BJ, thank you for the compliment and comment, as you know Dear Heart was my grandma's pet name for me, I can still hear her, "Dear Heart don't touch that!" I was always touching things in her china cabinet, lol! I wrote under that name until I said enough, I need to write under my own name... blessings ~Constance

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 1/28/2023 8:01:00 PM

Wonderful, Constance!

Constance La France
Date: 1/29/2023 1:00:00 PM

Kim, thank you so much for the compliment, blessings ~Constance