'dear Granddaddy'

I shall finish this letter to granddaddy tonight, I just cannot find the words that are right. I wish to thank him for fighting in the war, on the front line he stood, straight in sight. I bet he saw the such violence and abhor, but he knew exactly what America stood for. "Granddaddy, I wish I could’ve met you, granddaddy of mine- I wonder, did I get my ginger hair from you? My momma said you were utterly divine and that I would have loved you too.” little does she know... (I already do) (crumbles letter up) This letter must be perfect so he can read it from heaven where he lives in creed. I keep rewriting, I know not the words to say, but I am determined to finish this, indeed! For wretched cancer took granddaddy away. O, I hope he knows that momma’s okay. "GUESS WHAT! I got a new puppy in honor of you, I named him Frankie, your name too! I tug his ears, he slobbers on my face, kisses from heaven I’d like to embrace.” This is the final draft, it’s ready to be mailed, but instead I go to his gravesite and nailed my letter to a flower, hope he receives! It’s full of questions and memories detailed, for in my heart I know in me he believes. This letter I wrote, I hope an angel retrieves. "Farewell and be blessed, my dear granddaddy, for one day you shall be alive again with me. Love, Jeremy" I chose photo #2 October 2, 2019 Realism Art Poetry Contest Eve Roper
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Roper Avatar
October 25, 2019 at 5:33 PM
Laura, this is a great write I enjoyed reading. Thank you for participating in my contest. Congratulations on your win. Hugs Eve
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October 4, 2019 at 1:57 AM
Wow! I am blown away by your imaginative write. You got into this boy's head and knew EXACTLY what he was thinking! Beautifully done!
Scars Avatar
October 9, 2019 at 7:55 AM
thank you, I loved this pic, it drew me in...be blessed sweet Caren ;)-luloo
Adams Avatar
October 2, 2019 at 10:35 AM
this is gorgeous my friend...i stand in awe of your talent once again...simply beautiful and heartfelt...good luck in the contest! :) hugs
Scars Avatar
October 9, 2019 at 7:39 AM
thank you and be blessed sweetest Sandy :)-luloo
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October 2, 2019 at 10:17 AM
WOW... This is simply awesome and amazing. I truly love it. You did a wondrous, gifted, beautiful (not enough adjectives) poem with this image. I so love it. Bless you always, sweet friend - and it is definitely a winner!!!
Scars Avatar
October 9, 2019 at 7:39 AM
i feel so undeserving of your kindness. thank you and God bless! :)-luloo
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