Laila Andresen Mjelde Poet Verse

Dear God, Honestly

Dear God, honestly
                                    our inner divine deserves only a small "g"
                        we need to open our eyes and do something about it
                                             honestly, before it's too late......











Laila Andresen Mjelde 17.11.2012

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Gail Debole May 4, 2013 at 7:18 PM Laila - This one has me thinking. Like your use of the small "g". We all need to aspire to a higher standard. - Gail

David Williams January 14, 2013 at 12:13 PM Laila like this a lot...David

Apoorva Patrikar December 31, 2012 at 6:18 AM bravo!! on soup after a long long time, happy new year!

Ndaba Sibanda December 25, 2012 at 8:32 AM Interesting poem. God bless , and happy holidays!

Jasonpoet Boyd December 9, 2012 at 6:01 AM True the path to rightousness starts with Gods word flowing through ones heart and out ones life.

Kabuteng P.Ink K. November 29, 2012 at 11:25 AM Something to ponder about and I think that yes, sometimes we have our eyes closed for far too long, we need to try to open them--- I hope all is well with you! hugs to you :) Glad to see that you are posting again, yay for that :)!

Len Gasun November 27, 2012 at 9:53 AM Another very wonderful verse and prayer which I've enjoyed reading my friend! Thank you so much for sharing and God bless you always! love always, Leonora

David Williams November 27, 2012 at 1:11 AM Hi Laila a really heartfelt plea that I like, and I will be with your dad sitting along side...David

Poet Destroyer A November 26, 2012 at 7:46 PM Laila, a very interesting take you have on this demotion,,, love it... xox~pd

Apoorva Patrikar November 19, 2012 at 7:34 PM nice lines!