Dear God

I wish I could write you a love song
Fill with heart felt words
I wish I could say that I love you and meant every word
But as you know I am just a man
And even now as I have grown
I still cannot understand the meaning of those three letter words.

I spent my life searching
I spent my days hoping
Even now as I have aged and have a family of my own
I still do not understand the meaning of those three letter words

They say, that they love you
They say, that they care
But their words are cheap and weigh no value.

My heart is still broken
My bones are weak
My nights are restless
And my soul is asleep.

I feel so hopeless
Defeated and crush
These burdens I carry
Have me buried in a dump.

I try to call out
I try to shout
But these words I speak
No one can hear me.

God take my hand
Lift my pain
Save me from this cane
I am afraid its about to leave a big old stain.

Lord I am in so much pain
These scares bring nothing but shame
Jesus please let it rain
Save me, I think I am about to go completely in sane.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015



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Date: 1/28/2015 4:25:00 PM
Your words gently take the reader to your private place where feelings can drift and pain seeks refuge. Emile.
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Scarlette Howard
Date: 7/19/2017 4:47:00 PM
thank you
Date: 1/28/2015 3:44:00 PM
Very powerful pen Patricia! I enjoyed your prayer pleas to God in this piece, dear friend. A 7 from me! And a fav for me. Have a lovely evening! Love and hugs! xxxxx D. ^O^
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Scarlette Howard
Date: 7/19/2017 4:46:00 PM
thank you
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