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Dear God

You are sun in day, moon at night, my breath, my life, bliss, heaven, my love. 04.05.2021 Submitted to Contest Name : Bite Size Poem 2 Sponsor : Line Gauthier 2nd place

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Greg Gaul

Date: 6/4/2021 1:28:00 PM

Rama, this is cleverly crafted and shaped. Congratulations on your placement.

Kim Merryman

Date: 5/30/2021 7:02:00 PM

Rama, this is so beautiful! Congrats on your win! Blessings, Kim M

Rama Balasubramanian
Date: 5/31/2021 7:00:00 AM

Thanks Kim. Take care, God bless!

Carol Mitra

Date: 5/29/2021 6:19:00 PM

Lovely Rama....Congrats on your win....much love :)

Rama Balasubramanian
Date: 5/29/2021 11:17:00 PM

Thanks, Take care, God bless!

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 5/29/2021 9:06:00 AM

Congratulations on your win. A wonderful, "Dear God" write. I Love It. Have a blessed day................

Rama Balasubramanian
Date: 5/29/2021 9:40:00 AM

Thanks

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/29/2021 8:34:00 AM

ahhh, so nice. and it even resembles a crescent moon in its shape. Congrats on the win

Rama Balasubramanian
Date: 5/29/2021 9:40:00 AM

Thanks Andrea

David Mchattie

Date: 5/3/2021 6:00:00 PM

Well said my friend. Have a great day.

Rama Balasubramanian
Date: 5/3/2021 6:37:00 PM

Thanks David, take care, God bless! Rama

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 5/3/2021 4:26:00 PM

Hello Rama, oh i like this. Well done. Blessings my friend.

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 5/5/2021 11:49:00 AM

Hello Rama, God Bless you. Darlene

Rama Balasubramanian
Date: 5/3/2021 6:36:00 PM

Thanks Darlene, Take care, God bless! Rama

Sam Kauffman

Date: 5/3/2021 12:10:00 PM

Just lovely, Rama. I like the formatting. It surely does illustrate your words in a visual way. Blessings to you.

Rama Balasubramanian
Date: 5/3/2021 12:24:00 PM

Thanks Sam. Take care,God bless!