Rama Balasubramanian Poet Monoku

Dear God

 
                    You are
           sun in day,
 moon at night,
  my breath, 
     my life, 
       bliss, 
         heaven, 
            my love.

04.05.2021

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Contest Name : Bite Size Poem 2 
Sponsor : Line Gauthier
2nd place

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Greg Gaul June 4, 2021 at 1:28 PM Rama, this is cleverly crafted and shaped. Congratulations on your placement.

Kim Merryman May 30, 2021 at 7:02 PM Rama, this is so beautiful! Congrats on your win! Blessings, Kim M Rama Balasubramanian May 31, 2021 at 7:00 AM Thanks Kim. Take care, God bless!

Carol Mitra May 29, 2021 at 6:19 PM Lovely Rama....Congrats on your win....much love :) Rama Balasubramanian May 29, 2021 at 11:17 PM Thanks, Take care, God bless!

Paula Goldsmith May 29, 2021 at 9:06 AM Congratulations on your win. A wonderful, "Dear God" write. I Love It. Have a blessed day................ Rama Balasubramanian May 29, 2021 at 9:40 AM Thanks

Andrea Dietrich May 29, 2021 at 8:34 AM ahhh, so nice. and it even resembles a crescent moon in its shape. Congrats on the win Rama Balasubramanian May 29, 2021 at 9:40 AM Thanks Andrea

David Mchattie May 3, 2021 at 6:00 PM Well said my friend. Have a great day. Rama Balasubramanian May 3, 2021 at 6:37 PM Thanks David, take care, God bless! Rama

Darlene De Beaulieu May 3, 2021 at 4:26 PM Hello Rama, oh i like this. Well done. Blessings my friend. Darlene De Beaulieu May 5, 2021 at 11:49 AM Hello Rama, God Bless you. Darlene Rama Balasubramanian May 3, 2021 at 6:36 PM Thanks Darlene, Take care, God bless! Rama

Sam Kauffman May 3, 2021 at 12:10 PM Just lovely, Rama. I like the formatting. It surely does illustrate your words in a visual way. Blessings to you. Rama Balasubramanian May 3, 2021 at 12:24 PM Thanks Sam. Take care,God bless!