Eduardo Bustamante Poet Free verse

Dear Friend

Would you still be my friend if I told you I loved you?
That after all these years you were always the one
How watching you smile—is like watching the sun rise
Beautiful like a night-flowering cereus, and arousing like chocolate covered deserts.
That your big brown delicious eyes make me salivate,
Like a Saint Bernard on the hottest day of August.
I might be a man—you might be a man— so what?

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Poet Destroyer A April 12, 2016 at 12:59 PM eduardo bustamante, you've expressed yourself well, I enjoyed your poem. Love LINDA :)

Skat A August 30, 2015 at 2:30 PM EDUARDO, Great piece to read today, Well done ~SKAT~

Carol Sunshine Brown March 22, 2012 at 1:25 PM I am stopping back today to see if you have continued to write and post new poetry Eduardo. I hope that you will continue with your writing. You have taken the first step~ ~to write and share. When you feel the need for inspiration read some of the other poetry here at PoetrySoup. It will help you. Love, Carol

Carol Sunshine Brown March 12, 2012 at 6:11 AM A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you Eduardo. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love, Carol Eduardo Bustamante March 12, 2012 at 2:17 PM Thank you for those refreshing words Carol! :)

Anne-Lise Andresen March 9, 2012 at 5:27 PM Welcome into P-Soup Eduardo, thank you for scharing your poem today.Well done - beautiful written.This is a hello from Norway and Anne-Lise Eduardo Bustamante March 10, 2012 at 11:06 AM Thank you so much Anne Lise :)

Leo Larry Amadore March 9, 2012 at 4:56 PM Well done...emotionally wrenching and worded with finesse, but directly and bravely stated. Love comes in many flavors. Eduardo Bustamante March 10, 2012 at 11:06 AM Thank you so much larry-- you are right it does.