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Two deer stand near- soon stop to hop in barred front yard. O'er stump they jump- leap dense black fence. Each rubs my shrubs then nips and clips to scrunch and munch. Their thrill until they pare shrubs bare. Oh, dear! Bad deer!! November 16, 2022 Premiere Contest: A New Hiku Footle or Tanka Sponsor: Brian Strand

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Date: 11/17/2022 10:12:00 PM
Oh well! At least they inspired you to write these amazing footles:)
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Date: 11/16/2022 10:43:00 PM
beautiful your footle on dearly deer
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