Notes About The Poem

Dear Deer


Two deer
     stand near

Soon stop
     to hop

In barred
     front yard

O'er stump
     they jump

Leap dense
      spiked fence

Each rub
     huge shrub

Then nip
     and clip

To scrunch
     and munch
  
They pare
     shrubs bare

Oh, dear
      bad deer!!
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Ashley Avatar
May 14, 2024 at 5:28 PM
Dear Sandra, a wonderfully animated set of footles. Lovely lively imagery. Congratulations for your win in Brian's contest. warmest wishes.. ~Susan
Daniel Avatar
November 17, 2022 at 10:12 PM
Oh well! At least they inspired you to write these amazing footles:)
Bangalee Avatar
November 16, 2022 at 10:43 PM
beautiful your footle on dearly deer
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