Dear Deer
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Two deer
stand near-
soon stop
to hop
in barred
front yard.
O'er stump
they jump-
leap dense
black fence.
Each rubs
my shrubs
then nips
and clips
to scrunch
and munch.
Their thrill
until
they pare
shrubs bare.
Oh, dear!
Bad deer!!
November 16, 2022
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