Fatima Nusairat Poet Free verse

Dear Dad

Oh Dad
You didn't smile! 

You were trembled, and tired
And.. feverish, you were! 

Your eyebrows arched 
And your lips tight 
And I didn't smile.. 
Oh Dad..! 

You were anxious, 
you swallow the fear
For the fear on me
Oh dad..
While, I was growing up! 

Aah my little heart.. 
If you were a herb for his cure.. 
I would surpassed my heart
Before the death, block your 
Eyes from me..! 
Fatima Nusairat

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Litan Dey October 5, 2013 at 6:35 AM Congratulations on your great win.... Fatima Nusairat October 8, 2013 at 11:56 AM Litan Dey thank you so much..!

Kelly Deschler September 30, 2013 at 4:10 PM Great work, Fatima! Congratulations on your win, as well!...Thank you for the kind comments. I really appreciate it! Fatima Nusairat October 3, 2013 at 9:58 PM Dear Kelly thank you so much. Appreciated

Ralph Taylor September 29, 2013 at 11:38 AM Excellent, Fatima. Congrats. Ralph Fatima Nusairat September 29, 2013 at 1:56 PM Than you Ralph..appreciated !

Sandra Adams September 28, 2013 at 9:03 PM nicely penned...congrats on your win :) Fatima Nusairat September 29, 2013 at 1:57 PM Thank you Sandra..appreciated

Skat A September 28, 2013 at 2:02 PM Fatima,love your winning poem ......... LOVE ~SKAT~ Fatima Nusairat September 28, 2013 at 2:13 PM Skat_Aux thank you dear,thank you so much

Shanity Rain September 28, 2013 at 12:00 PM Excellent description , Congratulations on a well deserved win. Fatima Nusairat September 28, 2013 at 2:53 PM Yvette Kelley>>thank you dear,appreciated !

Dr.Ram Mehta September 28, 2013 at 5:09 AM Congrats on the win in the contest, Fatima Fatima Nusairat September 28, 2013 at 9:44 AM Dr.Ram thank you so much.

Poet Destroyer A September 27, 2013 at 7:43 PM Fatima, , Congratulations on your "Beloved Poem" win. xox~ LINDA Fatima Nusairat September 28, 2013 at 9:46 AM Dear Poet Destroyer A. thank you so much,how nice you are dear! xoxo

Poet Destroyer A September 22, 2013 at 6:54 PM Hello Fatima, I wish I could tag your DEAR DAD poem with one of my own.. enjoyed... :) Wishing you the best when it comes to your writings. Congratulations on making the top, hottest, and best NEW poets on Poetry Soup list.... always & forever ~ Linda Fatima Nusairat September 23, 2013 at 5:49 PM Dear Destroyer thank you for kindly comment !