Dear Crush

Dear Crush,

How many bruises?
How many lonely nights?
How many broken hearts?
How many hurtful fights?

How many 'i'm fine' lies?
How many tears will fall?
Do you think I'm blind?
I know she caused them all! 

But I can't sway your heart.
I cannot make you see,
That when you hurt yourself,
You're really hurting me!






Sorry for this sucky poem. :/
-Mercury
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Ajmal Avatar
September 24, 2017 at 11:31 AM
A very beautiful written poem, this really is really beautiful, you don t need to call it sucky, believe me, this is the case with every single person, everyone has a crush on someone and only lucky ones are able to get their crush, otherwise when you re infront of your crush you can t even seem to find words, anyway, I ll really appreciate if you could find time to read my poems as well and let me knowmhow they sre
Stover Avatar
November 7, 2016 at 2:55 PM
Never call your poetry sucky. There's beauty in expressing yourself. The more you write the better your poems will be come. So keep writing.
Anderson Avatar
November 8, 2016 at 11:14 AM
Thanks. I guess I just feel sucky myself.
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