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dear alcohol

for the day i called you then you interred in my Saul you takes away my control for this moment i doubt my self i remember all battles i got kicked just no good memory remains just foolishness full of madness why you didn't lets my mind rise i thought you were mine to be with see,mine credits i carry see mine tears i sheds day after day just, see see , then realize how bad i loved you i remember what doctor told me he said' don't try a beat if you need life please quite i did not obey him because you took away mine balance even if your smile kills my houses's mosquito and yours taste never tired to satisfied me please pay back promise is promise right now i lose everything no house, no family just homeless pay me ,,,,please do you remember all my salary i gave to you? do realize how many times i worked for free when i had too much credit to pay for, dear alcohol please subscribe.

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Date: 4/16/2020 9:44:00 AM
It’s interesting that in both poems you refer to Saul who is the first Monarch. Unlike other monarchies his did not possess great wealth and trappings. The story of Saul is also a tragic tale because he turns from his faith and offers a sacrifice to a false god. I guess alcohol can be a false god and many sacrifice themselves to it.
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Date: 4/16/2020 9:35:00 AM
You have skills, I find your style refreshing. Blessings and welcome to Poetry Soup.
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Date: 4/16/2020 5:18:00 AM
thank you so much marty for your encouragement.....
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Date: 4/15/2020 11:00:00 PM
real life right there....i dig that line about the house's mosquito....clever....Keep Writing!
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