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Dear Alcohol

for the day i called you
then you interred in my Saul
you takes away my control 
for this moment i doubt my self
i remember all battles i got kicked

just no good memory remains
just foolishness full of madness
why you didn't lets my mind rise
i thought you were mine to be with

see,mine  credits  i carry 
see  mine tears i sheds day after day
just, see  see  ,

then realize how bad i loved you
i remember what doctor told me 
he said' don't try a beat  
if you need  life  please quite

i did not obey him 

because you took away mine balance 
even if your smile kills my houses's mosquito
and yours taste never tired to satisfied me

please pay back  promise is promise
right now i lose everything
no house, no family  just homeless

pay me ,,,,please  
do you remember all my salary i gave to you?
do realize how many times i worked for free
when i had too much credit to pay for, 

dear alcohol please subscribe.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2020




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Date: 4/16/2020 9:44:00 AM
It’s interesting that in both poems you refer to Saul who is the first Monarch. Unlike other monarchies his did not possess great wealth and trappings. The story of Saul is also a tragic tale because he turns from his faith and offers a sacrifice to a false god. I guess alcohol can be a false god and many sacrifice themselves to it.
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Date: 4/16/2020 9:35:00 AM
You have skills, I find your style refreshing. Blessings and welcome to Poetry Soup.
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Date: 4/16/2020 5:18:00 AM
thank you so much marty for your encouragement.....
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Date: 4/15/2020 11:00:00 PM
real life right there....i dig that line about the house's mosquito....clever....Keep Writing!
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