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Deal Killer

Your voice is a shriller since you shattered the pillar The one that held our foundation so strong Your words just meant nothing, you must've been bluffing There was never a deal all along We used to sing in harmony A spotlight for you- and one for me And I was promised you'd be there forever Oh I was so dumb to believe such a bum! I should've seen it when we were together Yet you shook my hand and promised to stand Next to me if something went wrong Deal Killer, Deal Killer! How could you shatter that pillar? The one that held us up- so strong -Deal Killer, Deal Killer! Your voice is now a shriller Oh, there was never a deal all along

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Date: 11/20/2011 12:59:00 PM
you unbosok yourself in this piece. a lot of firey expressions.simple language and well detailed.a very loveable piece
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Book: Shattered Sighs