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Deafening the Fools Remorse

Will a broken dawn rise for your regret , Soothsay a fool as he dupes the stooge, Just as clouds lay tracks formed from his jest, Your steadfast mercy can't rid it from you, I see a tempest brewing from the sky, My cellar door is open once amore, The most rugged of bones escape the eye, To become as one with the love of law, So lock yourself inside a cell of fear a key shall turn inside your wanton mind Spit in the face of fate I dare you hear Now reap what you have sewn with bitter lies You are a soldier of your last ideal, now before the wrath of it you must kneel.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 3/16/2015 12:36:00 AM
Lewis, Dropped by to say hi and congratulate you on having your poem selected by Soup's Administration. This is a wonderful poem to have featured on the homepage. ~Always & Forever~ LINDA
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Date: 3/15/2015 4:44:00 PM
LEWIS:) Congratulations on having your awesome poem featured on the soups Home Page. ~SKAT LOVE~
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Date: 2/28/2015 9:24:00 PM
Lewis, Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will get much delight in reading and in time become familiar with your verse. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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Date: 2/28/2015 9:15:00 PM
Did you take a litrature course in poetry? I might need to ask you some Q's down the road ! Thanx fer the reads tonight....have a wonderful weekend...much love, james
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Date: 2/28/2015 9:41:00 PM
Thank you James, I wish you a wonderful weekend also, as for a literature course, no. I failed English literature at school and very rarely read anything other than the instructive guidance on the back of microwaveable meals. My guidance would be as amateur as my writing.
Date: 2/28/2015 8:33:00 PM
Hi! I find this a bit epic. For sure a xool twist. Awesome ending. Lewis, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I want to be the first to invite you on over to the contest page. I OFFER MY CONTEST in hopes it inspires you in some way. I will enjoy following you and your poetry:) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy 2015, with New Poet Friends @-> LINDA <-@
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