Deafening Din

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Deafening din, to our chagrin Egoic thoughts go viral Stagnation therein is our sin Fears and desires spiral Abiding in silence Joyous, our innocence Synced to bliss pulse cadence Here now within Deafening din 19-November-2021 Quietus

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Bill Baker

Date: 11/19/2021 12:08:00 AM

Well written Unseeking Seeker. I especially liked the line, "Synced to bliss pulse cadence". It reminds me of listening to my heartbeat as I begin a meditation sesson. Bill

Unseeking Seeker
Date: 11/19/2021 12:54:00 AM

Many are nonplussed when we speak of thought rested awareness … so enslaved by compulsive thinking, we’ve become

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 11/18/2021 10:47:00 PM

Not a nice place to be in such noise. ~~

Unseeking Seeker
Date: 11/19/2021 12:55:00 AM

Minus fears and desires, craving and aversion, what remains but rippleless silence